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Be creative! Make lyrics song for JKT48

Discussion in 'General JKT48 Discussion' started by Hayashi Tadashi, Mar 9, 2015.

  1. Hayashi Tadashi

    Hayashi Tadashi Kenkyuusei

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    hello everyone, i just have a share of thought, that beside we criticize Aki-P for being so lazy making song for JKT48, and only concert of Japan 48Group, why don't we be creative and made song or lyrics for them, or if you are really good at composing, tried compose song for them.
    we'll i, my self don't really good at playing music instrument, so i'll start being creative to make lyrics for them.

    I have this idea because i watch the mecha mecha iketeru when there was time that Aki-P are forced to prove the song that sang by the OKL48 (Eien yori Shuzuku yoni)

    (Tittle OOOOOOOOO (i have have the tittle yet))
    by Fer'z (me)

    hey friends cheer up, don't be sad
    live is more than you know
    hey friends tried do your best
    cause something might come
    we will prove it to you

    don't be harsh to your self
    just enjoy it just enjoy it
    nothing come if don't enjoy

    hey friends come to me
    i'll listened to you
    hey friends believe me
    miracle do happen

    i love you but do you love me?
    i came from far
    for cheering you up, to entertain you

    we JKT48 will be here
    we'll share joy and happiness
    come to see us, and we'll be forever cheer you
     
  2. Hayashi Tadashi

    Hayashi Tadashi Kenkyuusei

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    if you don't want to support my idea, then don't comment. :asdfgh::asdfgh::asdfgh::asdfgh::asdfgh:
     
  3. mockingrayy

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    just link this thread to Aki-p's 755 probably he'll consider one of our thought lol
     
  4. honggo hari seputra

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    dafuq :lol:
    very funny bro....
     
  5. Mimi

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    Totally saw that coming.:fp:
     
  6. kapit173

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    so you are searching for..., supporter? lol come on why does indon always make a chaos on international forum? -_- You said lets be creative blah blah but you deleted someones idea? fuck off
     
  7. zakky26

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    You call that creative? This is a forum..there are rules...and is posting a pornography term like that creative? And please mind your language...

    Now you're the one badmouthing people on international forum...wherever you came from...

    The post wast deleted by the mod because it contains inappropriate words
     
  8. honeyNUT

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    It's actually not a joke. It's a form of sarcasm that shows how cheap indonesians are sold to mindless stupid lyrics that don't even match with the next line and how indonesians are easily sold by pornographic lyrics and dumb stupid dances


    And i wish our idol group won't end up like that and that's why i rather let aki-p make an ori song for JKT even if it took forever than let a local do it

    EDIT: and don't blame not having an original song is the reason why JKT is not as successful as AKB

    Sorry if i offended any of you guys

    My deepest apologies for my immaturity
     
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  9. zakky26

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    On that i totally agree with you...i don't want local song writer to write a song for JKT...OR,they can write it but they must have Aki-p's approval on it....
     
  10. RacerMCMXCVII

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    There's no way a local will ever write a song for them without Aki-P's green light... even the OKL song was approve by him...
     
  11. asplaysmayo

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    yes we can wait forever for original song. lets just listen to translated songs for a while. i mean good translated songs.
     
  12. DreamerKid

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    please mind your language, this is really offensive, now you're the one who making joke of yourself by bad mouthing in international forum, and i wasn't really keen with the word "indon" it feels like the "N" word in america for me,

    the admin deleted your lyric because it contain pornography term in it.

    i admit that sometimes between members of this forum has disagreement with something, but we always try to convey our idea in a polite and good manner, so please respect that!

    I respect @Hayashi Tadashi for making this thread, its his way to show his idea and dream that someday JKT48 will have original song, although it will be almost impossible that JKT48 will use other song besides the one that were made by Aki-p, but still its a good idea

    what JKT48 really need now, as we often discussed, is a better lyric translator, the one who can make a good translation not just merely literal translation of Aki-P lyrics, because more often then not the deep meaning of the song is lost within the translation,

    but again if anyone have a good idea for our beloved idol group, please share it, but just please once again, mind your language!!!
     
  13. Hayashi Tadashi

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    thank you for all the support that i get.
    i hate when people are start talking dirty language. as an indonesian i really do feel shame because that's not indonesia culture to disrespect other people
    the lyrics that i made contain takamina meigen (1 from her famous speech, and the other is her asobina asobina), harugon catch phrase, chikarina catch phrase and things the idol should do (base on how idol should listen to their fans on the hand shake even, even they only talk for 7 - 10 seconds)
     
  14. call me cubo

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    hmm this is interesting...
    i respect to you all who want to help JKT48 with this thread and ideas
    but i really want JKT have their original song from Aki-p
    however, Aki-p is the most eligible person to do that

    proud of you all ;););):1st::1st::1st::1st:
     
  15. Mimi

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    lol "help JKT48" cause their management must be following this thread now waiting for some kid to post a song so they can steal it and record it next week.
    I'm pretty sure this thread was meant as a creative outlet for people who like to write lyrics, the same way we have a thread for people who make wallpapers or write fanfiction, so everyone should stop posting unless they have lyrics to share or something (respectful) to say about others' lyrics.
     
  16. Kenichi Adam

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    Since their outstanding performance of River at Budokan Concert on 28 April 2013, it occurs to me that a 'charismatic image' fits JKT48 better that would distinguish them from the other sister groups. I think the concept of music along the line of "River" or something funky and upbeat should do it. It's time to change the notion of idol from cutesy to something POWERFUL! I prefer charismatic and authoritative idol over cute idol.
     
  17. too much idea

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    JKT always had this powerful-energetic image, and their RIVER performance in Budokan proves that to everyone. I dislike JKT who performed cute love song, i always love powerful JKT because that's the one that fits them best (energetic dance moves, beautiful choreography, strong lyrics). That's why i'm really happy with Beginner
     
  18. Hayashi Tadashi

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    JKT48 is really in to the music and dance with R&B song type.
    UZA perhaps is match to with JKT48, since the dance and the beat is strong too
    and Beby is also have also perform the UZA dance once at some stage. look at the youtube for the performance.
    she dance the way Itano dance
     
  19. Kenichi Adam

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    Or hip hop. I'm an old school boy so my taste is entrenched in American pop/dance musics of the eighties (of the 20th century) especially. For example:


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    Why I picked these three videos; firstly, the choreography is very demanding and sophisticated (or simply cool), and secondly, the music is rich with varying keys and also funky. I consider Michael Jackson as the best break dancer who set the standard in modern dance. If JKT can perform like these veterans, they would have established themselves already as the best idol group of the 48 family.

    Here are some more videos of the style of musics that I strongly believe can boost JKT to prominence:


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    Besides that, I love the 80's fashions. Their so rugged.

    {p.s.: I hate gangnam style because the dance is so ugly!}



    Ohhh, I can imagine JKT dancing and singing away to these 80's tunes. They'd be cool.

    I've listened to AKB's Beginner and UZA; I don't think the music are cut out for JKT. The tune is too moody and sullen. JKT needs a more vibrant musics that listeners can dance to. Musics that stimulating!



    For starter, I would suggest JKT to cover Ain't Nobody by Chaka Khan, Into The Groove by Madonna, Telephone by Sheena Easton and I Wanna Dance With Somebody by Whitney Houston as an experimental playground (EP). Their choreographer needs to come up with suitable dance pattern for the different songs.
     
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  20. Syae-Project

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    So in this thread we suppose to make a lyrics song for JKT48 like make Indonesian version lyrics of Green Flash??? (sorry for my English if it doesn't make sense)

    ©S-Project
     

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