Fanfic: The Barbarians Cherry Blossom.

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  1. MLG Faze Rain_Quickscope

    MLG Faze Rain_Quickscope Kenkyuusei

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    I made a Fanfic! Actually a crossover with a videogame called Endless Legend. This was a project I came up with during my Creative writing class. I continued to work on it ever since.

    Summary:
    Some AKB48 members (and some of the population of Tokyo) got abducted by aliens and are forced to live with them. Some of the girls longed to return home. While others are currently helping the aliens cope with their personal problems. (Ex. Miyuki helping a general with his drug problem and Sakura helping a Warlord understand what it means to be 'Alive'.)
    Contains violence, swearing and some funny scenes. (That would make Majisuka look like it was made by the Disney Channel)

    Pls check it out, review and subscribe!

    http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/978407

    Plus its also posted on JPHIP: http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39549.0

    I conduct polls and write Drabbles there.


    BTW do you know the writer Ruka Kikuchi?

    Cuz she loves my story a lot.

    Especially Rainoric vs super powered Gekikara (emphasis on Super Powered)
     
  2. MLG Faze Rain_Quickscope

    MLG Faze Rain_Quickscope Kenkyuusei

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    Has anyone seen my posts? Cuz I noticed a surge in viewings. Can I have a word from anyone who did? Will really help me alot if you do.
     
  3. AloNeko

    AloNeko Kenkyuusei

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    Try read. Not bad. are readed already much baded already...
    Good story, good idea...

    Can i say: thanks to link?
     
  4. MLG Faze Rain_Quickscope

    MLG Faze Rain_Quickscope Kenkyuusei

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    Um..... can you repeat what your saying but clearer? I don't understand
     
  5. AloNeko

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    Well. I thanks you at let me read your fan fiction.
     
  6. MLG Faze Rain_Quickscope

    MLG Faze Rain_Quickscope Kenkyuusei

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    Its an ongoing series so expect more to come.

    :)
     
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  9. MLG Faze Rain_Quickscope

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  10. ABF48

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    Why makes fanfics when you can make novel already ?

    Its too complex to be called fanfics, just sent your text to publisher and i think they will work on that. Just need a little bit editing here and there, also changed alien themes to more realistic fantasy themes, like "Narnia" for example. And then boom !!! you will have your first novel.

    I'm not an english person so that i cant give an opinion from western-writers/readers-perspective. But i can say, the way you put your words in your text is appealing. And its nice to read, at least for me.
     
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  11. MLG Faze Rain_Quickscope

    MLG Faze Rain_Quickscope Kenkyuusei

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    My mom has been saying that to me.

    So my the way I write this is appealing? Like which words?


    Merry Christmas btw
     
  12. ABF48

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    ^ Oh, you're not westerners, you're from philipines. I thought you're westerners, because from your works i notice that it contains so much difficult words, and somehow it give me the same feels like when i read western novel. i guess english is your first.

    Its appealing because i want to read it till over, its like you giving a continuous bum to us (readers), and it makes me cant stop reading and curious what happen in next. And i dont know how to put this but.. you have a very good way on describing the background of the story (am i put the rights words ? lol) in simple, i like how you describe the place, the character, the condition, or many else. its just sound exciting when reading all those things :)

    I like the characters names, Osgar Daguth, Ulrich etc. It gives the LOTR vibes, and i love LOTR.
     
  13. MLG Faze Rain_Quickscope

    MLG Faze Rain_Quickscope Kenkyuusei

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    I'm western Influenced.


    I get my ideas from many places,
    With Fire and Sword, Witcher, and other novels.

    I also get ideas from history, like I base my main original character (Rainoric)off of Clovis the 1st. The 1st king of France.

    I am glad you appreciate my work. And I will assure you and to anyone reading this.....


    More will.....come......
     
  14. MLG Faze Rain_Quickscope

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    So I did a little survey on the JPHIP Forum about what if...

    This music was playing during the chapter 'The Sack of Tokyo'




    Please say what you imagine happening when this is playing....


    One girl told me she Eargasmed....and it would make a nice Trailer for an epic movie, or epic battle.
     
  15. AloNeko

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    Hmm... not know yet what say...
     
  16. MLG Faze Rain_Quickscope

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    http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=39549.0

    I have a survey up that if you loyal Gimaelics are reading should answer....

    It involves one of my character's heads.

    Gizzur: Did somebody say heads?

    *whacks Gizzur with a club*

    Me: NOT YOU!
     
  17. MLG Faze Rain_Quickscope

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  18. AloNeko

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    Good story... if nothing else...
     
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  20. AloNeko

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    supplementary chapter... well... A Filler? at other words?
     

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